Second one was better (in layout) in that it didn't have an oddly shaped border around it. You could try colouring it, but I think you should work on nailing down your style first.

Dialogue...no suggestions there, since it's all quite minimalistic.

Yeah, go ahead and do a few more.

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Thanks Yun ima try to as you said cto nail down my style, i can draw them fine on paper, it's just when i have to redraw them in adobe i run into a few problems... /shrug ill do a few more, but not to soon, i have way too much homework i've been procrastinating so sad

oh and thanks for the border suggestion on the first one, i agree it looks a lot better

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well there preaty funny and completely random. good work! u win!

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Lol, thanks

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Keep doing, just make something happen. Carry short stories with the comic, and it improves, wether you like it or not. At least, according to everything I've read about writing comics.

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